Best demonstrates your ability to take a piece through the writing process:
In March of 2009 I wrote my persuasive essay titled, “Practice Love in Place of Hate”. Our assignment for this paper was to write a good argumentative essay that displayed my ability to demonstrate my understanding of what an argument essay is and also what the effective parts of an essay are. My thesis, “An alternative for America was, and still is, to respond through love, rather than by reacting with hate. As salvation is not delivered through hate; it is won through a practice and a pledge to love in spite of hate”, is strong for this essay and lets the reader know my viewpoint as well as what they will learn about in my essay. I supported my thesis with quotes from humanitarian, Greg Mortenson, author, Marianne Williamson, and reporter, Felina Saguil, who was my cited source from ProQuest, which was also a part of my assignment. I was able to give examples of how people can practice love in place of hate. Although there is always room for more knowledge, I definitely met the requested requirements of the assignment and I am proud of the message it carries.
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